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  1. HisashiBrhi on Chapter 1 Thu 14 Jun 2018 01:35AM UTC

    Miya of the band MUCC wearing bear ears and nose, looking utterly done with life, surrounded by multi-coloured confetti.

    Hmm, I dunno. This is... I find myself inclined to side with Yuuki over Jui. Not that I think Jui would harm Yo-ka in any way. And I don't for one second buy that pathetic "I don't believe in boyfriends" nonsense. But I really feel like Yo-ka belongs with Yuuki, and I strongly dislike that Jui just severed Yuuki's connection to him. Kami or not, that's just rude.

    Who is "Yoshi"? Is that Ruiza's real name? Or was it meant to be Toshi someone was talking to?

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    1. Selah on Chapter 1 Thu 14 Jun 2018 02:48AM UTC

      That's fair. Jui... well, you might want to skip these, then, cuz Yo-ka stays with Jui.

      Ruiza's real name is Nakahama Yoshiyuki, shortened to Yoshi, at least by these guys.

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      1. HisashiBrhi on Chapter 1 Thu 14 Jun 2018 01:08PM UTC

        Miya of the band MUCC wearing bear ears and nose, looking utterly done with life, surrounded by multi-coloured confetti.

        No, I won't skip. I'll just grumble a little, which is no reflection on you or your writing at all, I promise.

        I figured it was a reference to Ruiza's real name, but for whatever reason couldn't find what that real name was!

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        1. Selah on Chapter 1 Thu 14 Jun 2018 01:38PM UTC

          I can take a little grumbling. ^^

          Wikipedia! Though Ruiza's been known for awhile, cuz he's an ex-Johnny's www

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          1. HisashiBrhi on Chapter 1 Thu 14 Jun 2018 03:55PM UTC

            Miya of the band MUCC wearing bear ears and nose, looking utterly done with life, surrounded by multi-coloured confetti.

            I'd totally forgotten about him being a Johnny's.

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            1. Selah on Chapter 1 Thu 14 Jun 2018 04:01PM UTC

              Well, it *was* a long time ago and he never made it to a debut, I don't think, so... By internet standards, it's practically ancient history.

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