Normally I'm not a huge fan of world building taking up too much space at the beginning of a fic but damn, I just could not stop reading. I am so looking forward to more :D
I generally don't exposé so much like that either in chapter one, but the whole fic is completely built upon this world and so needed to really set the scene and history before things get moving. I do try to keep it engaging though and it sounds like it worked :D Thanks for the comment and do hope to see you at future chapters! ♥
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