Comment on Hope: The Truest Treasure

1. Way_too_involved on Chapter 1 Mon 18 Jun 2018 09:03PM UTC

   

   I loved the whole thing but particularly the beginning... idk why but that pert in italics hit me hard, maybe cz it legit pulled me to the story?
   Anyways, as usual, i excited to see what will happen here ❤

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2. 1. IcyPanther on Chapter 1 Mon 18 Jun 2018 09:04PM UTC

      

      Stream of consciousness is my favorite writing style, personally, but it can't be overused or it gets dull and even sometimes confusing. I was super excited to start off with it though and really sink us into Lance's head ♥
      Thanks for the comment, hope to see you next chapter!

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