Ethan (Guest)
on Chapter 1
Sun 22
Jul 201812:41AM UTC
THIS IS SO GOOD!!!!!! Like, I’m super into the whole Loki-ends-up-as-Tony’s-slave thing, but adding in that Loki has a child makes it so much more interesting!!!!! Anyways, good job and keep up the great work!! :D
Right?? Loki as Tony's slave is my thing, I can't get enough of it! But I don't want to write the same thing over and over, gotta keep it interesting, and the kid really adds a whole other dynamic to it. Thanks for commenting!
The kid adds a whole dimension of leverage and cause for submission that others don't have. (Not that Stark would USE a kid as leverage.... At least not THIS Tony. I do enjoy the ones where he would as well.
I wrote some of the "dark butterfly" where Tony does use the kid as leverage. He doesn't mistreat her but he does make it clear that that option is on the table if Loki doesn't obey. Also went down the "creative bondage" path too lol. If only I had time to write everything I want to write! *Sigh*
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