i loved this story. I've read a ton of run aus and I'm amazed at how this idea can be so simple yet so flexible and expandable. Your story, too, is so unique even when it comes from the same source. I liked the end especially, I felt it captured the vibe of the video very nicely. Just a thought, but I would've liked to see more of Hoseok's character? I feel he didn't appear much. But yeah! a read I really enjoyed and a story that made me emotional at times. that's when you know it's good.
Oh wowwie, thank you so much for taking the time to write your feedback! I really appreciate it!!
I'm really happy you enjoyed yourself. The Run universe means a lot to me and I'm glad I could share how good it makes me feel with others who will feel it just as much. Picking the video apart to write it in narrative form was also a fun challenge!
I'm sorry about Hoseok, really. He's the only one who didn't get an individual segment, and I feel terrible about that because I love love love his character, but by the time I was ready to post, I couldn't come up with an idea interesting enough to write for him. Initially, the plan was to have him in a segment where he accompanied Jimin or Tae on a house call and ended up having to fight someone on their behalf, but that really didn't do his character complexity justice so I didn't write it. I'm really thinking of inserting an extra segment somewhere for Hoseok. The leading prompt for now is that one of the boys does something to defy the mafia, and Hoseok is the enforcer sent to rectify the situation. It's a very loaded prompt and I dunno if I'll find the energy to write it for now. (although if I'm going to insert it as an edit to the story, it better be sooner than later, I know...)
Anyway! Thanks so much for giving LBH a chance and I am so thrilled that you enjoyed it. I'm super appreciative of your support for my first BTS fic!!
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