Goodness, I love your enthusasm for this work! Makes it all worth while o(^_^)o
And... It may be just a little while before the next update because right now I'm trying to clear out some WIPs I've had sitting around for a while. Just to clear me head, you know? I've been writing this mpreg series for like a year straight and I just wanted to take a breather (￣▽￣) IT WON'T BE A SUPER LONG TIME THOUGH! I've been looking forward to writing the next chapter anyway :) Even I'm like "they gotta work this thing out soon..."
It's all good! It actually inspires me to write to know there is someone who wants to know what's going to happen. And thank for the understanding, of course.
Oh you are so kind to check in on me XD. Chapter 5 is in the works! I don't know why I'm having such trouble with this chapter, but it's at least started!
Let me know if I can help you. I think there is a lot to think about how Souza will react to Nikkari coming for him to talk about their feelings for each other and the baby Souza desparately tries to hide.
Thank you so much for the offer! I know exactly where I want the chapter to go and what I want to be said, but I just can't write it. I don't know. It's weird.
And you are right. It really does have to focus on how Souza reacts to his secret being revealed to one-time lover and good friend. Maybe I should just take it with that look instead of taking it at the whole picture. I think I'm overwhelming myself with all of the different layers to this. One thing at a time! Right?
I really do appreciate you opening up yourself to aid me. I'm going to try working on it a little more (Right now, actually XD) and if I get uber stuck, I may even come to you for advice, if you wouldn't mind. I think I just have to relax and trust my instincts on this.
(haha. Thanks for being my writing psychiatrist XD)
Nikkari left Kogitsunemaru behind and walk in direction of the rooms Souza shares with his brother. Then he thought about how to approach the situation with Souza so he walked to the kitchen to talk to either Kasen or Shokudaikiri.
“Hi Nikkari. How are you doing?” Shokudaikiri wanted to know
“I’m fine, Shokudaikiri. Can you do me a favour and put some food for Souza together? He needs more nutritions,” Nikkari looks at his friend
“That’s a good idea since I was thinking about that Souza needs some food since he hasn’t eaten much lately. It will take couple of minutes to prepare the food,” Mitsutada said and shortly after he handed Nikkari a tray with food for Souza.
“Thank you for this, Shokudaikiri.” Nikkari smiles at his friend then left the kitchen to see Souza. This going to be a hard one, Nikkari thought to him while walking to the room of the Samonji brothers and knocks gently on the shoji. Sayo opens the shoji and looks at Nikkari who has kneeled down to be on the level of the Tantou.
“Hello Nikkari-san. Can I help you?”
“I would like to see Souza if he’s feeling well enough for it, Sayo.” Nikkari looks at Sayo.
“Souza is sleeping. He’s still not feeling well.” A weak voice from the back interrupts them both.
“Who is it, Sayo?”
“It’s Nikkari -san and and he brought you food. You should eat something, Nii-san.” He looks at his brother.
“I’m really not in the state to receive visitors and friends at the moment but you are right that I should eat something. Let him in, Sayo,” Souza said softly trying to sit up when suddenly two strong arms gently helps him up so he can lean against some cushions. Souza looks surprised at Nikkari and whispers a “Thank you” to him then watches his friend and lover getting the tray and returns to his side.
“I’ve asked Shokudaikiri to make this for you, Souza. And I will feed you. All you have to do is to eat.” Nikkari offered him some rice to start with.
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LE GASP! I actually really, really like this. Like a lot. I may actually implement some of this into what I have already written and will write... Wow! Thank you so much! (You will obviously be given credit when I post the chapter, as long as you are comfortable with that).
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