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  1. dedicatedfollower467 on Chapter 2 Wed 19 Sep 2018 01:02AM UTC

    Cartoon picture of the author, wearing glasses, looking at the camera.

    awwwww miles' disappointment that phoenix isn't gonna try to reach out to him is so precious.

    also i love the way you write miles' trains of thoughts here; perfectly logical, and then he accidentally says "objection!" and it comes out of nowhere and he doesn't know what to do

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    1. salainen on Chapter 2 Wed 19 Sep 2018 02:43AM UTC

      An Ace Attorney-style "Objection!" bubble changed to read "Nope!"

      Yeah, he doesn't have the best handle on his brain-mouth filter. It's kind of a problem, especially because half of his flirting comes out as "WRIGHT YOU IDIOT".

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