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  1. Lucade on Chapter 2 Wed 26 Sep 2018 08:15PM UTC

    Hi !
    It was supposed to be a oneshot but let me tell you I'm happy that's not the case anymore ! I'm going to hit the subscribe button just in case you decide to make a third one.
    Portgas D. Luffy. Love it ! And when are they going to realize Sabo's alive ? Because with this name change, Garp will be all over it. So of course it's going to reach the ears of the revolutionaries and Dragons. It's just going to take times but since they already have been on the sea for years it's not too far fetched (if it's even english, I'm not english if you couldn't tell from my beautiful writing, but I think that an english expression, if not, my bad ._. )
    And the ultimate question : what about the meramera no mi.
    Because technically, Riot ate the fruit from another timeline, which means there should still be the fruit for Ace in this one ! And since two same fruits can't exist at the same time it's going to be fun to explain.
    I know, I know... One(two)-shot. But one can dream, no ?

    Anyway, in case you didn't realize yet, I just love this story ! Thank you so much for writing it. I have just one question. The new tattoo hid both the old one and the wounds, but are the wounds still discernable (you know, because it's a scar so there is relief) ?
    Because if not, when they're going to discover its existence, it's going to be fun to explain. I can just picture it "Oh that ? I was collateral damage on Akainu's way. He probably don't even remember me. Don't worry about it." "Don't worry ? There is a hole going through your whole chest. How are you even alive ?"

    I'm going to stop here before I write a whole new chapter into a comment XD
    Thanks again and good luck with your next works ;)

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    PS : I can so much see Marco being the one to discover the irregularity of the tattoo because of the wound and asking Riot if he can check something (because he choose to do so or because the rest of the commanders asked him to), without telling what and just touching the scar on one side. And then his eyes go wides and "The fuck..." before making Riot turn to check the other side because he just can't believe it.

    Last Edited Wed 26 Sep 2018 08:26PM UTC

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    1. Sanjuno on Chapter 2 Sun 31 Mar 2019 08:34PM UTC

      A red and gold mermaid looking up holding a trident.

      Hi back~ Riot is going to basically get adopted by Garp when he catches up the the Anarchy because that's what Garp does. Also Luffy's name change isn't advertised so much as it is assumed due to both Riot and Ace being Portgas Ds. When Sabo leaves Baltigo for his first Rev. Army mission he runs into Ace and Luffy, so he's going to be... somewhere around 13 or 14 ish? The shenanigans involve kidnapping and Sabo eating the Yami Yami no Mi so it's. Going to be an event.

      (Something being "farfetched" is indeed an expression in the English language.)

      I've finagled it so that Riot ate the Mera Mera no Mi, Model: Legendary Godfire. Which allows Ace to eat the Mera Mera no Mi provided he eats a different Model. I mean, Riot's basically going to be the first example ever of a Legendary Logia, but it's still a valid explanation. ^_^

      Yeah, the scars are still kinda visible from close up and really obvious through physical contact. Given, you know, that Riot had a tunnel the size of Akainu's fist drilled through his sternum. Marco is going to have. Concerns. Which he isn't going to voice at first because it's just a one night stand but then the relationship develops into a romantic relationship and fuck how is he supposed to bring something like this up? DX

      I'm glad you enjoyed the story. ^_^

      Last Edited Sun 31 Mar 2019 08:35PM UTC

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