The plot is built up wonderfully! Its so exciting! So many cool details and the worldbuilding is really nice for a story that still only has Lance and Keith in it. Ughh Lance is such my fave character and its really nice to see him here in a slightly different relationship with Keith. There is still that insecurity but also an acknowledgement of where he does fall behind from Keith. I do have some questions .. like what is the situation with Lance? Is he aware of what happened to him? Did Keith understand what Lance turned into for a second? Also, do we get to see the rest of the gang soon?
Thank you so much, I'm so glad you're enjoying it!!
Lance knows a little bit about his powers but he doesn't know what causes them, and a lot more is going to be revealed/explained in the next chapter. The rest of the gang will start showing up from chapter 4 onward!
Thanks for reading and I hope you have a great day!!
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