HELENNNNN thank you so, so much for reading this as I wrote it, I can't stress enough how much it helps me ;o; And lol /I/ can't believe how fast I wrote this, but apparently I have two speed settings ("barely writing" or "WRITE EVERYTHING"). I'm so glad you think Dorian is in character, I'm always second-guessing characterization stuff and it's super important for me to get it right. The fact that you got EVERYTHING I was trying to convey about him & his relationship with Bull makes me so happy :') ♥
The ending was originally the first scene I wrote for this fic, actually! But it didn't ~fit so I scrapped it and then when I got to the end it sorta popped back up again, I still wasn't 100% sure about it so I'm super relieved it works for you!! ♥
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