Comment on A Small Unwitting Smile

1. Volaare (Guest) on Chapter 2 Fri 15 Feb 2019 03:25AM UTC

   I wish readers could give kudos on more than one chapter...

   Anyway. Nice parallel with the photos. Elijah and Chloe, Rheia and Markus. Lots of interesting character and motivation building stuff here. Rheia's thoughts and wants are very relatable and real sounding, natural-like. It flows, yknow?

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2. 1. rainyew7892 on Chapter 2 Mon 17 Apr 2023 09:33PM UTC

      

      Yeah right??! Totally agree with you!!

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