Comment on After the Hospital Wing

  1. VentoSereno on Chapter 2 Sat 16 Mar 2019 10:54PM UTC

    Sorry to hear my story doesn’t do it for you! I really enjoy this particular episode.

    I think I agree with you that this scene could seem out of character for Remus! But I also think that debating what may or may not be in character for a fictional protagonist is a bit silly and besides the point.

    As I said in my last response - I really write for my own enjoyment and pleasure. I think it likely that I will end up writing many iterations of Remadora - I certainly think about many different versions of the same events in their story. So keep an eye out for that!

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    1. Annabel7 on Chapter 2 Thu 16 Apr 2020 05:45PM UTC

      I actually really liked it and found it in character? Not that canon matters in fanfic at all, but JKR said herself that he went between euphoria and despair, but most people write that as "not miserable and miserable." This was joyous and playful, perhaps a bit short-sighted but he's been though /a lot/ and has utterly given in. I found it sweet and charming, and a lovely moment of light and laughter in an otherwise awful time in both their lives.

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      1. Allythegreat1 on Chapter 2 Wed 28 Oct 2020 10:36PM UTC

        That Proudfoot was a giant jerk
        The nerve of that guy

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