Comment on the endless push and pull of tides

1. studyinsurvival on Chapter 1 Fri 03 May 2019 08:42AM UTC

   

   I dont know sht about avatar/bending/this entire AU but you still blew me away with this. the scene after ronan broke down and adam holds him and later when theyre back in the country and adam has to leave the cave to cry because hes so sad that ronan wants to die (i had legit tears in my eyes). adams patience with ronan, his stubbornness ( how can you place him in an entirely different world/storyline and still get the characterisation so on point??).

   also. the kissing scene and the few paragraphs before!!!! my heart is double its size i think its gonna burst outta my chest

   i loved this. cant wait for the epilogue

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2. 1. shinealightonme on Chapter 1 Sat 11 May 2019 08:11PM UTC

      

      Thank you kindly, I'm so glad you liked this despite not knowing the Avatar canon! The breakdown scenes were very fun to write, and I love hearing that people enjoyed my characterizations :D

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