Love the imagery, especially the branding section. I'm disappointed you didn't pay enough attention to Cumore's codpiece, but hopefully, you fix that with the next chapter (jk).
Very interested to see where this goes! Vesperia is a Good, and can't wait to see more of what you do with everyone!
Struggled with that branding section, so I'm glad to hear it's well received! Also... if I'm lucky, I'll never have to speak of that man's codpiece ever again LOL
I really appreciate the feedback honestly, LOVE knowing other people are also invested in this story (discord sob emoji) thanks so much for commenting!!
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