So much in character and such a gripping story! Work for it, Jaime, she's worth it!
Ahh, the mere exchange of names in the end is so them... Somehow every time they say each other's names It's a declaration of love in itself. I love how you used "breathed out" when Jaime says her name, because that's how it felt on the show, every time he spoke it, it was as gentle as a breath.
Beautiful. Waiting to see how the great Jaime Lannister plans to win the biggest, most important tournament of his life.
Oh Jaime is definitely going to have to put some effort into winning back her trust. I can not tell you how much it means for you to say you think I have written these characters true to form. Thank you again you your wonderful comments. They brighten my day so much
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