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  1. Oh yeah, and sorry I've been spamming you so much, but I just remembered another question I had.
    When you wrote Bro, did you intentionally make him sound like a pedophile? The way he loves how innocent and childlike John is, and just some things he says... it's so realistic. And creepy.

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    1. Ernest Khemingway

      I wrote him as being on the borderlines of it, yes. He's previously always, without realising, gone for younger people when looking for one night stands, and savours childish qualities.

      HOWEVER, I would not say he is fully-fledged in the disorder, and it is something that with help he will move on from.

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      1. That's actually really creepy.
        Also you made me feel so awful for Dave, I never really thought of their Strifes as being so violent before I read this.

        ...wanders away to lesbian island of not giving a fuck

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