Skyblj (Guest)
on Chapter 1
Fri 24
May 201901:21AM UTC
Amazing, i want you to continue please. But do u know what i would like? To have Jiraiya in a chapter but not only as the crazy pervert. I want him to be the only one that noticed naruto's psyche and try and make it up a hit. Like for example giving him pats on the shoulders, encouraging words or any kind of positive reinforcments. And i want him to tell tsunade about what he suspected.
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Skyblj (Guest) on Chapter 1 Fri 24 May 2019 01:21AM UTC
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