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1. Etnoe on Chapter 1 Mon 27 May 2019 05:23PM UTC

   

   Delightful! I love Jane's magical & animalistic perspective on these ordinary things like catching up with Roxy and eating out. "Roxy looks at her like she's started making friends with tuna" -- I love it.

   And I really like Jane's thoughts of her first impression of Dirk. And how badly they'll both surely freak out now!

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2. 1. Dragoneisha on Chapter 1 Mon 27 May 2019 06:32PM UTC

      

      [looks at dirks reaction in chapter two] haha thats one way to put it

      im very glad you like it! more is coming dw

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