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1. NexusPhillanthropist (Guest) on Chapter 5 Fri 05 Jul 2019 07:05AM UTC

   Another great chapter! And of course John would be oblivious to Liara's obvious feelings for him, that's both hilarious and sad. Also I see that you went with the Templar route this time, really hope Fiona's ok in this story since we know what happens to her if that route is taken :(

   The only nitpick is that you called Kaidan 'Kieren' by mistake. :3
   Other than that its an awesome chapter, keep up the great work! :D

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2. 1. Biowarenerd on Chapter 5 Fri 05 Jul 2019 02:35PM UTC

      

      Wait I did?? Haha I guess I’m so used to saying Kieran in my dragon age stories. I didn’t even notice that thanks

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   2. 1. NexusPhillanthropist (Guest) on Chapter 5 Fri 05 Jul 2019 10:45PM UTC

         Don't worry about it, it's a minor thing and mistakes happen ;)

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