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  1. Seek_The_Mist on Chapter 6 Thu 25 Jul 2019 08:56AM UTC

    WOW OKAY THIS IS THE FLAGSHIP OF SEXUAL TENSION FROM START TO FINISH!!!

    This chapter is making me a bit sad that the fic is only T rated because URGH we want to know all the things Adam would (and God I hope he will) do to Ronan to make him wake up hard!!!

    Ronan being flopped down in the bathtub the whole time is honestly hilarious, even more so with Adam getting in as well.

    "HE'S NOT ALLOWED TO TOUCH YOU" URGHHHHHH

    Also I really liked the existential dialogue in the context of the worldbuilding, even though it's difficult for them go see eye to eye because of the different backgrounds.

    AND WE MOVED FROM STRAY TO PARRISH, JESUS GOD!!!

    I sympathise with Adam's frustration because I, too, was dying to have them kissing, but it's very sweet the fact that Ronan doesn't want it immediately because Adam might not mean it, Adam wants it immediately because Ronan might change his mind.
    I think it also reflects very well on the different way they handle time because of the AU setting and I LOVE IT ❤❤❤

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    1. parttimehuman on Chapter 6 Fri 26 Jul 2019 07:54AM UTC

      So this whole story was absolutely, 100% E rated at first. Blame it on my poor time management that there was no kiss later on, and none of the MORE that I wanted to give them. On that note, it is never too late for some smut. I write porn all the time, just for different fandoms/ships, but I'm not ruling it out lol.

      Again, THANK YOU!!!

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