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  1. Anon (Guest) on Chapter 1 Tue 06 Aug 2019 02:41AM UTC

    Oh wow. The story is here. Amazing how I'll just drift away for a while, come back, and something's here. It's not going to be a great review, other people are better at noticing things, but wow I'm so happy this is here.
    Glad there's no character bashing. It's very tiring to mentally defend characters, but I tend to do so even if I'm indifferent on them (only when I dislike them that that doesn't happen). It's kind of weird, after having the last story center around 4 characters, to have all the canon characters back. Can't say I'm complaining though. I smiled when they saw Xavier. Don't mind OCs either. They happen. Fictional worlds are a big place and to not have any OCs, the story usually have to be pretty short.
    Anyway, that's enough for now. Looking forward to more.

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    1. izabellwit on Chapter 1 Sat 23 Nov 2019 04:15AM UTC

      Sorry for the delay! (of both the sequel, and this reply to your lovely comment, haha,,). I'm happy that you were excited about it!!! I hope this story lives up to expectations! XD

      No worries-- I'm not a big fan of character bashing myself, so despite all these tangled threads, you have my word I'll do my best to treat these characters fairly! It's weird for me to bring in all the other characters too--there's so much to juggle around, and so many new character threads to explore! That said, it's definitely fun-- Xavier was an absolute delight to write, and I hope the OCs, when they come, are just as entertaining!! ✨

      Thank you so much for commenting!! It really means a lot to me ❤️

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