claude: i'm like dropping hints that i'm almyran edel: ?? claude: i'm-- edel: yeah i know
what can i even say to this... just...aaa? i loved quite literally every word..you have a talent for somehow integrating every character i think people talking about how fucked up cyril's situation is, i felt that. everyone adopt him now not just the cast, but even the mentions of holst and duke aegir... it feels like a complete world
edel has to be my favorite part of this...she's just the perfect mix of stubborness, pride, but also... genuinely wanting to do the right thing with edel and claude as friends i can almost hope things don't go to shit later she was...almost about to tell him everything then, wasn't she...though their ideals don't match up perfectly, there's a chance and i will take it i always thought their dynamic could be interesting, and this delivered and more i could not be happier really there is a criminal lack of the lords just hanging out in game..
and claude! i love him too...easygoing and seemingly on top of everything, but the longer this went on the more honest he was... his fear of death...even here he has to rely on schemes to live, unlike edel Heir To The EmpireTM it's hard to balance everyone being through way too much and having way more responsibility than they should, but also being 17-18 year olds, but this got it perfectly
also your byleth is perfect. this is exactly what byleth should be like dimitri's reactions to her just made it better
not to mention the plot...? going from bandits to nice pirates to stranded alone (and then claude's healing magic! i literally went !! when he mentioned that) nothing is too obvious, or too out of left-field and thinking about it...there aren't even really spoilers, just many many allusions to things...that takes skill (and now i can rec it to everyone--)
thank you for this fic, i now love claude and edel way too much
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