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1. Inkblot0Blue on Chapter 7 Tue 24 Sep 2019 02:21PM UTC

   

   I'm really enjoying this! I like your writing style and your characterisation (particularly of Sebastian!). My only point of critique would be that you perhaps missed out on exploring AAI2 Miles and his whole quest to define what it means to be a prosecutor what with Kay and Raymond and Lang; I would've been curious to see how you would've played with colour there in the final resolution of Gregory's last case and DL-6. But ah well, keep up the good work!

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2. 1. TiedyedTrickster on Chapter 7 Tue 24 Sep 2019 03:51PM UTC

      

      Thank-you, I'm glad you enjoyed how I handled Sebastian! ^^

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