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  1. Oh my god.

    Like seriously, oh my god. I am in love with your style. The way you write and construct these images and metaphors it's masterful. I am shook and overwhelmed by the emotions in this piece so far. I genuinely cannot even articulate how much I adore the way you've constructed it.

    That paragraph about the way their relationship came to be? About who made the first move? Stunning. I had CHILLS.

    Thank you so much for sharing this work, I'm excited to keep reading!

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