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  1. HoshiSoul on Chapter 1 Sat 02 Nov 2019 01:09PM UTC

    Oh myy, what an interesting idea o.o I LOVE fanfics spin around superpowers, hehe, and this chapter is incredibly yammy, thank you~

    And waaaah, Dazai-san's pov! *.* Pov that feels so canonic and truthful, haggard and never-ending, at some point, i sincerely wished him this long-awaited peace and quit v_v (but then our blessed Chuuya-san grabbed the baton and made a point about HIS fully right to killpunch Dazai, sorry Chuuya-san, how could i forgot...). And that scene with night, roof and jets looks so badass and pretentiously beautiful(and the cover art resonates with it perfectly adkhklsl) *picking up drool* Uugh, our wide-hearted and protective Chuuya-saaaan ♥ He protec, he attac, he punch Dazai in some fuckin singularity ball and cause some strange and scary turn of events??? I've honestly waited for the big boom and idk if it would be better than smth that awaits them????

    I was surprised by how completely differently Fyodor is perceived the moment he's lost his ability. And that Crime and Punishment leaving his body line really feels like it's his personality trying to find a new vessel, wow. A little creepy, but again, delicious as hell >w< I wonder if we see a mere human Fedya later, but for now he could be the main spectator of such a show, i'm envy...

    And wow, very interesting piece of information about spider lilies and cemeteries o.o Educational minute + big symbol for the story + funny-sad-lovely moment with the bouqet? (remember that roof scene again, and Chuuya's ability spider lily-looking blast, waaaaaah ♥w♥)

    Can't wait for the revelation of what happened to Chuuya and Dazai *w* Many-many thanks to You, everyone involved with this story!

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    1. setosdarkness on Chapter 1 Mon 04 Nov 2019 03:26AM UTC

      hoshi-san asdjflasds ♥♥♥♥♥ i feel like hoshi-san knows me too well... already expecting the big boom hahahah it will happen in the next part, with more chuuya being badass and powerful heavenly being who will kill dazai with happiness and human-ness!

      chuuya vs singularity: 2 (1 in Dead Apple, 1 here)

      i write chuuya pov more often (because i love him lol) so writing dazai was a bit challenging... i didn't want to make him too melodramatic... but ahhh... if he came across as close to canon, then i'm aaaaaaahhh *tears of joy*

      we'll have bits of pure human fedya later, don't worry!

      the fic was written entirely to my laptop background being pictures of spider lilies hahahaha they look so beautiful (and the symbolism are very useful.... esp as tie-in to chuuya/arahabaki fufufufu)

      thanks so much hoshi-san ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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