Well, isn't this a whumpy slap in the face. But at least Tony is there to be a buffer. I love Peter's thoughtfulness and the way you captured Michelle's numbness seems very true to life (I am no expert on trauma either, though). This is a great start! And I hope everything gets better for MJ... Can't wait for more!
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lostnfound14 on Chapter 1 Thu 09 Jan 2020 12:23AM UTC
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