Nicole (Guest)
on Chapter 1
Thu 30
Jan 202006:08PM UTC
Just one tiny thing. You use the word 'maul'. I think the word you want is 'mull'. You mull something over You get mauled by a bear. Otherwise very good! Interested to see what happens in Dauntless.
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