Comment on A Fake and Practiced Smile Pt 1.

1. Ranciditie on Chapter 2 Mon 03 Feb 2020 03:48PM UTC

   

   Dang, this hits really hard. I want to say more, but I'm at a loss of words for now, but in a good way. I love the way you write! The attention to detail really drives in the tone and actions of these characters. Also, everything flows really well and its immensely satisfying to read what you write.

   Thank you for the update!

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2. 1. AedanWrites on Chapter 2 Mon 10 Feb 2020 03:53AM UTC

      

      THANK YOU SO MUCH. I'm always hesitant in writing fics because I feel my stuff is either very boring or out of character!

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