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  1. TheVoiceOfAllThings on Chapter 22 Tue 18 Feb 2020 12:23AM UTC

    Oh wow, I stayed up waaaaayyy too late last night reading this and got as much reading in today as possible. This story is absolutely enthralling.

    I loved:

    - The family aspect to the story
    -The way you wrote the various relationships/character interactions
    -How I was always in suspense, sure that something exciting was just around the corner
    -How Sora/Riku are in a relationship but it doesn't consume a huge portion of the focus of the story.
    -Vanitas and Sora. Just... Everything about how you wrote them together. I love it. I think I have a new brotp
    -Roxas in your story. He takes no shit but like genuinely cares about Sora.
    -Just all the lore and history you included with Cloud and Squall
    -The work you must have put into editing but wow, so few errors and I don't think I ever skimmed a paragraph
    -How Sora incorporates the worlds he's visited into his attempts to bond with his siblings. It's just such a Sora move and I loved seeing him share his adventures.

     

    I'm sure there's other things I'm missing that I'd likely add if I read it through again, which I'm sure I will soon. It's been a while since I was so sucked into a story. I'm happy there was so many chapters for me to enjoy in one go, but I'm super, super sad that there's only a chapter or two left. I'm suddenly in love with this new family of misfits, it would be so sweet to see how their relationships grow from here. I'll look forward to the final chapters and the collection of one shots you have planned.

    Thank you for sharing and for all of your hard work!

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    1. LetoaSai on Chapter 22 Tue 18 Feb 2020 07:22PM UTC

      Okay, i'm flailing a little bit! Thank you!
      I really appreciate you reading and all the kind words.

      This entire thing was a super self indulgent mess of things i wanted... Sora with his sibling where Xion was included.
      Vanitas redemption!
      Strifeharts! Because... I can't look at Sora between Cloud and Leon and not think he's their child. He just is.
      Roxas not being so miserable.. i know he has reasons but it's okay to be yourself now!
      Vanitas treating the unversed like his security blanket.
      Someone acknowledging that Yen Sid is an asshole!

      There were so many little things and i'm glad you enjoyed them and shared them with me. I'm not even ready to let go, hence the coming one-shots. I hope you enjoy those too.
      Thank you again for reading!

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