Comment on Naruto: Alternate Ending

  1. marcela (Guest) on Chapter 2 Thu 20 Feb 2020 07:12PM UTC

    Wow! I loved your story. The plot is amazing and well crafted. Poor Naruto, I can"t even imagine his frustration right now. The ony thing that you need to improve is the paragraphs because is too long. Maybe there was a problem when you posted on ao3 and the archived was scrambled. I am sorry for the bad english is not my first language, but i am trying to improve so yeah.

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    1. ShiShiro on Chapter 2 Fri 21 Feb 2020 02:31AM UTC

      Thank you for taking time to comment on my work! I truly appreciate it. Your words are very kind and english is very good!
      I do have trouble posting on AO3, it is a very confusing process (haha). I'll do my best on fixing the paragraphs. I assume you mean things like indention and starting the paragraphs rather than the overall length of each paragraph? Oh wait you might be talking about that...
      Please let me know, and thank you again for commenting!

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      1. marcela (Guest) on Chapter 2 Fri 21 Feb 2020 10:05AM UTC

        Hi! Thank you so much for answering. It was actually about the lenght of the paragraph. On chapter one it was great, but on chapter two the whole text was in one big paragraph only. I know it was not your intention, of course. I asked my friends who write on ao3 and they said that sometimes when they post, the ao3 change the format and the whole chapter ended being one big chapter with no spaces. I will ask them how to fix this for you ok. Thanks

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        1. ShiShiro on Chapter 2 Fri 06 Mar 2020 02:42AM UTC

          Hello again! I'm very sorry for such a late reply. I checked on my laptop and phone for the problem but could not see it. May it have been the device you were on? I am really sorry and hope it doesn't persist.

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