I very much enjoyed this opening chapter! I think your Edelgard characterization is excellent. She feels like a tricky character to adapt into modern AU content, but you did so very well!
Little touches like the simplistic group chat name and the Hubert Plant also made me smile, excellent stuff!
thank you! edelgard can be hard because she's like... crazy. love her to death but you know it's hard to make a revolutionary emperor into a college hockey player.
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Oricalle on Chapter 1 Mon 06 Apr 2020 05:17PM UTC
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