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  1. EmyLilas on Chapter 9 Tue 28 Apr 2020 02:22PM UTC

    This one is definitely one of my fav. Well, you know me well enough now to know that I'll say that again later... But you're the only one to be blamed for! This fic is full of little moments of pure magic!
    This one is about missed opportunities and I really, really like writing about them. BUT I also really really like reading about them and you just wrote perfectly about it. It's incredibly how with short sentences you can make us feel the need to call but the fear and anxiety and finally, not acting on it because you just can't. It's perfectly done.
    I'm so glad Meredith calls. I'm so glad she's seizing the opportunity and not just thinking about it!

    (By the way, I've started writing something about Mer and Addie and those missed opportunities a long time ago, maybe I'll get back writing it! Reading this chapter of yours reminded me of it!
    And just to let you know, I don't have time today to catch up with all those chapters of Falling Apart, barely breathing so I'll do it whenever I can but I promise I won't forget to read and comment them!!)

    So, thank you for this lovely chapter. It was pure, sincere and I really loved it!

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    1. bobbiejelly on Chapter 9 Tue 28 Apr 2020 02:25PM UTC

      Awe glad you liked the missed opportunities concept. It IS nice I think!

      Short sentences is fun. And it IS nice when Meredith calls.

      I’d love to read another fix of yours! And more of truth or dare I’m DYING TO KNOW.

      And whenever you have time with falling apart barely breathing. I know I try to update on the daily and that’s a LOT for people with the longer chapters. Hey maybe it’ll even be more fun for you to binge read it later :)

      THANKS FOR YOUR LOVELY COMMENTS MISSED IT!!!

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      1. EmyLilas on Chapter 9 Tue 28 Apr 2020 02:28PM UTC

        I'm finally uploading Truth or Dare today, don't worry!

        And yes, there's a lot to read but I find it really impressive how you are challenging yourself to keep posting a chapter everyday. You really can be proud of yourself because you manage to have quantity AND quality. And that's rare. So be proud my friend!
        And for sure, I'll binge read it and it's gonna be great to do so!

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        1. bobbiejelly on Chapter 9 Tue 28 Apr 2020 02:29PM UTC

          Hahaha thanks!

          I feel like I’m doing NaNoWriMo in April.

          Like 30 chapters in 30 days!

          It’s a rush. But it is HARD to keep up.

          And the quality is mostly there I know sometimes chapters are shorter. But it IS going somewhere I promise.

          And part of the writing it in such a closed loop is that I remember a lot of what I was thinking at each time :)

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