i love love loved this!!!! this is, as you know, my FAVORITE PREMISE and you handled it so so well, i'm so impressed with the way you added texture and color to the bare bones of this idea until it really came to life. the holocaust scenes are really hard to read, in the best way, and that's just one example of how vivid and incredible your writing is. i love love love everyone's protectiveness over lil erik, the way they all stand up against phillips (even howard!!! i LOVE YOUR HOWARD) to keep him from weaponizing erik again, and i love steve and bucky's tenderness toward him. <3 ugh the pain of those last two sentences. i can't wait to see what you do with the winter soldier and steve's sacrifice. <3 i love this!!
Khdfhfdzfz you're making me blush! Thank you so much for your elaborate comment 🥰 I'm glad you liked it so much, especially the descriptive scenes (I had some doubts about it being a lil bit too dramatic but eh, it's literature). I'll do my best to surprise you with the next part xD and maybe a nice father-son relationship between Howard and Tony.
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