Ahh, I'm so happy that they finally kissed!! I really love how you ended this, I think it's perfect (not to mention, it really helps if you did NOT want to write out a whole raid)! And I'm so glad that I didn't annoy you with my comments! I know what it's like to not have that encouragement to keep writing out things for your characters and wanted to make sure you knew that someone was into them!
Also, hell yes, Sarah J.Maas is an amazing author. I LOVED the ACOTAR series. So cool to know her writing influenced yours.
I'm so glad you liked it!! And yeah, I love this raid, but I've been down the road of writing a whole raid before and let me tell you I am never doing that again, especially with something as long as Last Wish. But I do really want to go into them more after the raid so I will keep working on that for the next one lol. I just finished Sarah J. Maas's Crescent City book, which was really good and of course has a beautiful damaged love story that made me think of Torak a bit (you should totally read it if you haven't yet!). I also didn't go into him much in this story but Damian has a bit of Rhys inspiration to him as well.
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faketyran on Chapter 7 Tue 16 Jun 2020 04:30AM UTC
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demiclar on Chapter 7 Tue 16 Jun 2020 07:26PM UTC
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