I don't think it starts inappropriately slow at all. I agree with you; these two adolescents have a _ long _ way to travel. They have to grow into a sexual relationship AND recognize that they are ending another one that was important to both of them (ijn different ways). That is, the relationship with Mike.
By the way...it may be too late for this request but...I hope that El is grown up enough (if she's in a sexual relationship, she'd better be) to break up with Mike as soon as she admits to herself that her love for Will has encroached on her love for Mike. Please don't let Mike hang in the wind, but have El treat him with respect.
Mike's kinda got his own thing going on. It may not be 100% clean, but yes, we'll have a transition. This is intended to be a story of self-discovery, not infidelity.
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