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1. my_wife_made_me_do_it on Chapter 23 Sat 08 Aug 2020 12:20AM UTC

   

   Language is fine. Thanks for the feedback. I'll take that as, 'i did a good twist'...right?

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2. 1. fleeingpancakes on Chapter 23 Sat 08 Aug 2020 12:52AM UTC

      

      it is indeed good, couldn't have seen it coming at all. makes me wonder, what else do you have in store?? anyway good plot-twists only make stories better!

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