I loved this story! I loved how you wrote Conner, he had a complicated life, his family was complicated, as Clark and Lois are good people but he can't be happy, I loved how you wrote his complicated feelings, how he is always wearing a mask, he he only loves his boyfriend Tim, Conner was very excited for the future, he moved to England with Tim, they lived together and went to the same university, his father Lex helped prepare everything, but now what will be in his life ? Conner thinking about how strange Dick and Damian's relationship was, the big difference in age, the fact that they treat each other like brothers, and even call themselves brothers but they are dating, that their family accepts their relationship! Conner going to Jon's room, but Jon was in the heat, as Conner couldn't resist, Jon was calling him, begging his brother to fuck him!
I loved the whole sex scene, how you wrote Conner becoming more wild and irrational, he kept trying to remember what his parents, what different people told him, how he knew how dangerous the situation was, but he I couldn't remember the reason! Conner and Jon were very horny, they were desperate for each other, I loved how you wrote how Conner felt, the feelings he felt, how to fuck Jon was very good, how he never felt so much pleasure before, he was crazy, he thought that Jon should get pregnant, that it was his duty as a big brother to get pregnant Jon, I loved the rough sex, how Conner fucked him deeply, how he started to fuck Jon's uterus! The difference in size, Jon asking to be full, as Conner started degrading him, but after the knot, as Jon realized there was going to be, he tried to run away, say no, but irrational Conner ignored him, Conner raped him, said it was Jon's fault, that Jon deserved and should be fucked! Jon scared, and Conner saying that Jon wanted to be fucked, Conner marked Jon!
Conner's reaction to realizing what he did, how Jon seemed broken and more obedient, Conner crying, Conner's thoughts were sad, how he feels he ruined his life, that now his family will hate him, that Lois and Clark they will never trust him again, that Lois is a good woman, she does not deserve to be treated as he treats her, that he lost Tim, that the future he dreamed of is no longer possible, Tim's family will no longer want him, and he ruined Jon's future, he desperate and talking to Lex, i'm very curious about what will happen to the characters, what does Lex plan to help his son? I really want to know the consequences of this story, how will Conner's relationship with Clark, Lois and Tim be? Will he be able to move with Tim to England? Should he take Jon with him, as the boy is his mate? Will Tim accept that he is not Conner's omega, does Conner have another omega? And Bruce and Damian? What if Jon is pregnant? Will Lex get the boy to have an abortion before Clark returns from the trip? Will Conner manage to convince his brother not to tell about the rape? Will he use his influence as Jon's Alpha and that Jon is still in the heat to convince the boy? I am very curious and excited for the second chapter
I had had this idea for a while, but I didn't know if someone would be interested in reading about this couple or not. At first Conner was just going to be a dumb kid with a dysfunctional family, but as I thought more about this and wrote down my planning I ended up being what you read. A sad guy with a relatively good life but who doesn't like it. I am very much of the omegaverse of long ago, where things like the destined did not exist and literally the alphas killed each other to see who would get the omega. Where the alphas were bastards and the few who were not... Well, they were treated very badly. All those questions will be answered soon, as soon as October is over I will update all my unfinished stories. Thank you so much for the comment, this make me smile the whole day.
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MoonLord on Chapter 1 Fri 14 Aug 2020 01:14AM UTC
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