Vezen (Guest)
on Chapter 1
Tue 01
Sep 202012:10PM UTC
Your Russian inserts are good, you can't argue, but some details still slip away. Names, mostly. And if everything turned out well with Yasha and Stepan, then with Natasha and Tony you missed a little. In Russia, there is no reduction of the waist, only Tasha or Nata. And Tony is Anton, not Anatoly. The latter abbreviation sounds like Tolik or Tolya, not Tony.
Sorry about my English. I wrote through a translator
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Vezen (Guest) on Chapter 1 Tue 01 Sep 2020 12:10PM UTC
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