Comment on Omerta: The Vow of Loyalty

  1. j93min on Chapter 4 Thu 01 Oct 2020 03:42AM UTC

    AHH THIS STORY IS SO GOOD

    I've been looking for a while for a really good story to read (specifically yoonmin and jikook lol) and this story is right up my ally, i just finished reading all the chapters! this is so intense, i couldn't stop reading

    jungkook is so precious i wanted to cry when he kept looking for reassurance in hobi, i can feel how terrified he is but also how committed he is. jin is scary asf haha, i've known people who are as charming and also pushful as he is, he's a rabbit hole fr

    it was really cute when jungkook tried hitting on jimin, i'm glad jimin firmly told him not to let anyone know he hit on him, for his own good

    the last scene was surprising and very eerie, also sweet night by tae started to play on my playlist during that scene which made it hit so much harder, i'm afraid of what's going to happen especially since yoongi is understandably unsettled followed by jungkook

    yoongi really needs to start communicating with jimin :( it's really unhealthy for him (and jimin) to keep things bottled up like that, it'll affect jimin and their relationship badly so i'm hoping he'll come around to talking about how he feels-- especially with jimin because they're in a relationship

    thank you for writing this, i'm looking forward to the next update! <3

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    1. KhushbooKaul2 on Chapter 4 Mon 05 Oct 2020 07:54PM UTC

      Thank you for saying such nice things. I love Sweet Night so much and I am definitely going to add it to my writing playlist after this. And I can assure you, I will not be writing MCD, mostly because there is no way I can write that without crying so no one is going to be injured too severely. Thank you so much for reading <3

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