Would just commenting “YELLING” count? Because goodness this was wonderful! You captured Goemon beautifully, and all the little moments of the past — I’m not sure how many references to past episodes/movies were intentional (versus just “characters being in character”) but goodness, what wonderful interpretations — so similar to how I think of the crew :)
Pleeeeeease keep writing! I’m really looking forward to reading to rest of the POVs, especially Lupin and Fujiko!
I do my best to hint at referencing some stuff when it’s relevant, like Gretchen is from a Part 3 episode etc, but I think all of the flashbacks in this one are just my own imagination melding and remixing events that seem plausible based on what has been in the show. I’m so glad it feels in character for you!
I promise to keep writing, especially since the next chapter is Jigen hehe hoping to have that one done before the end of December!
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TabbieWolf on Chapter 2 Sun 18 Oct 2020 12:46AM UTC
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