BLARGH (Guest)
on Chapter 3
Mon 26
Oct 202003:56AM UTC
Oh my gOD I can’t stop smiling! I just finished reading this chapter and everything is so fuzzy and sweet in this tangy and tarty and fresh and too ripe way like when you bite into a sickly sweet strawberry and the taste lingers on your tongue and you get awkward but enjoyable goosebumps and hbfhvdgvjgvbggbcgjkjfsfc- I just. I honestly can’t put into words how much I LOVED this! It was stunning and spectacular and adorable and glorious and marvelous and wonderful and exciting and just all around astonishingly amazing. No, these sentences aren’t made to be grammatically correct. It’s 11 pm and I can’t not make another comment about this because oh my sweet baby Jesus this was magnifique. Thank you so much for writing this- I’m absolutely entranced with this story. Your content gives me life and butterflies and moths because moths deserve appreciation too and hsdfghvgjkhgdgfjgkkfsafzafctfb I’m rambling- just. Know that I will forever appreciate this story and you, author and editor.
I started this at 11:05- it’s 11:46—-
Also lame title reccs: Sonic or Flash?, He Doesn’t Scratch It, Could Be Better But We Don’t Need It, Jagged Lines and Torn Paper, If We Change Together, I had other ones but my comment didn’t send so I had to remake this (I copied and pasted most of it) if it does end up sending though then sorry for the spam
BLARGH (Guest)
on Chapter 3
Mon 26
Oct 202004:49AM UTC
I kinda wanted to make it similar to the one you already had and I kinda got it from how they reacted with each other’s drinks. Tord seemed surprised but accepting enough and Tom sounded like he was willing to change his habits for Tord considering the circumstances so that’s where I got the “shards” from (also it sounded cool in my head). Like he’d break the bottle as if he were standing against it. Tom also remembered that Tord likes Iced Coffee (I think? Didn’t he? Or did I read it wrong??) and even got one for him at the office despite the awkward tension they were sharing for a bit. I probably should have made the title recc: “Ribboned Iced Coffee and Shards Of Smirnoff” so it would be subtly emphasizing how Iced Coffee seemed like a favorable drink where they share the special moment over and “ribbon” could’ve possibly given hints to the romantic theme. It’s whatevs though.
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