BRO, SAMEEE! That concept gives me FEELS! lol. I'm SO happy you enjoyed it! You know, I always kinda figured that the adults basically knew the words were from Naruto, but because of how they feel about him, they don't care. :( Haha! That line from Shikamaru about it being kind of intimate and such was a last-minute world- and character-building addition, so I'm really happy you liked it! :D And I really didn't notice that the writing style changed for Shikamaru's thoughts (probs 'cause I'm just so used to writing him by now, what with the almost 100k I have for 'Surface Breaker,' my main Naruto AU, where he's an MC, lol), but now that I've read it again, I see it, and I'm SO thrilled you liked that! Hahaha! Yay! And YES, he's as eagle-eyed as they come! lol. >:D I should be finishing and posting ch 2 shortly, so I can't wait to hear what you think! AW! You're SO welcome! :'D Thank YOU so much for reading and especially reviewing! You're the best! <3
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Shizuku749 on Chapter 1 Sun 15 Nov 2020 09:02PM UTC
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