Spectacular job with this fic! Between your beautiful writing style to the character portrayals to the actual story, there hasn't been a chapter I failed to enjoy. This one's probably my favorite of the three so far; I loved Carmen's confusion at the beginning to her and Julia's conversation (I mentally froze at Julia's blunt "You died here" and was stunned almost as bad as poor Carmen by the revelation) to the end. I was so worried Julia would leave and was so relieved when Carmen spoke up. And I absolutely loved the final dialog exchange and practically melted at Carmen saying that her friends should meet Julia. Well done and looking forward to what comes next!
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FrozenWings on Chapter 3 Wed 16 Dec 2020 06:55PM UTC
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