Oh man oh man okay first of all, finally some GOOD FUKING FOOD!!!! The way Hitch and Bradley get on is literally so cute, I'm really liking the brother vibes that are going on especially with Bradley helping Hitch out and Hitch letting him call him Art :,) someone protect this child The characterizations of everyone is spot on, particularly the descriptions of Sam and Casey (she is FREAKY have never been more scared of a ten year old but also like, the Warning Signs Were There) I especially like Casey's reveal! Honestly that whole scene is IMMACULATE, I've reread it like twice now. The whole description of Bradley and Hitch's attacks were really vivid, and worked really well around everything Child actually hinted at. I'm really excited to read this and get some evil!Hitch content! Can't wait for next week!!!
oh my god thank you!!! this is all such good feedback and you're so kind! also if you think this is good food... wait till you see what I've got waiting for chapters 4 and 5 :))))) i'm really glad you enjoy it, thank you <3
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