I saw that you've been working on this fic a while now (kudos for dedication!) and writing style can change a LOT in a year. I totally get looking back on early work and wanting to change it. I applaud you for going back and inserting passages! Apart from the pacing, I have zero problem with the writing itself; I think you're great. :)
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FraserOrcaKatla1 on Chapter 3 Sun 20 Dec 2020 06:43AM UTC
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