Okay, this was SO GOOD that I actually went back to reread and comment on each chapter. Bc there's so much good stuff, this may end up being one of my favorite stories ❤️ I knew you from your TDDK fics and was super happy you got into JJK so this small fandom/ship can reap the benefits of your writing. Anyways, I love the way you write their love, and the devil's in the details, so I'll get started:
> "Do not think of these as your be-all and end-all, because here is a little spoiler when it comes to being in love with someone: You are always at the beginning. And, if you are very, very lucky, you will forever continue to always be at the beginning." LOOOOVED THIS
> I love for Toji's relationship with Megumi which we will never see. You can see the dysfunction yet the real love
> Nanami teaching Yuuji how to tie that tie made me so soft 😢 he is so responsible and reasonable that it hurts
> I'm already hurting lol I can't imagine a world where Yuuji and Megumi knowingly hurt each other but I guess we're about to see the lengths to which their misunderstanding goes
OKAY, LISTEN. THE FACT THAT YOU WENT BACK TO REREAD AND COMMENT ON EACH CHAPTER MAKES ME WANT TO SCREAM. IN A VERY, VERY GOOD WAY. the devil is indeed in the details, and the amount of attention you put into all your comments — which, i know i’m only replying to this one, but i promise i have reread all the others at least five times and have smiled so wide every time — is bringing my heart so close to bursting. there’s a very specific happiness that comes with seeing your thoughts about so many scenes, from big conversational pieces to much needed assurance that the therapy scene was okay to even toji being toji, so thank you, thank you, thank you.
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vivevoce on Chapter 1 Wed 23 Dec 2020 07:14AM UTC
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