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  1. Darth_Sylph on Chapter 2 Fri 08 Jan 2021 03:29AM UTC

    *staaaaaaaaaaaaaaaare*

    Like...holy shit man.

    I’m genuinely trying to think of something meaningful to say here.

    But all I got is “what the fucking hell did I just read?”

    I’m a sucker for angsty YōChika, and recently discovered that passion also extends to YuPomu,

    Didn’t expect the Pomu to go on a literal murder spree, thought it’d be more like 1 defenestration, maybe a couple serious (but non fatal) accidents, and then Pomu would get her ‘happy’ end.

    But you went all out on these poor girls! Even KasuKasu! And Haruka too!

    Hell, she might’ve gotten away with it all if she’d been a little more patient, stabbing Shizu was a bad move, and strangling Kasumi was just asking to get caught!
    And then the suspenseful escape, followed by Yuu goin splat (least I think that’s what happened, killed on impact with the water? Or did she hit something else on the way down?),

    $10 says Kanata ends up in a psych ward, and our...”protagonist” offs herself once she realizes she indirectly killed Yuu

     

    *glances at wall of text*
    Well, guess I had more to say than I thought i did

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    1. rocks on Chapter 2 Fri 08 Jan 2021 04:05AM UTC

      Hehe oops? Yeah the whole premise for this fic was "lol what if Ayumu just committed murder" and when I was done writing, there were actually less deaths than I expected. I was gonna pick 'em off one by one but the characters ended up doing their own thing without my permission.

      Thank you for reading! And for sharing your thoughts; I love long comments hehe.

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