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  1. arionbw965 on Chapter 4 Wed 03 Feb 2021 04:53AM UTC

    OOOOOOOOH 👀👀 HEH sghdfhfdggfghj i feel like i'm six lmfao
    the part 👀 with terria 👀 sfhhdfh i am looking, maven. she is looking 👀 we see you staring, kid dgjgfhjfgjhfgjfhj
    'I’ve been here for five minutes and the only thing he’s said is Blue. Someone kill me now.' HAGFSGG MOOD- this sounds like something i would think ngl i love it 👌 and the little part after that tho. i like how you could put those two points together, it works very nicely
    'GG might just be a friend. What about- Maven tells himself to shut up. There’s no way.' HM 👀 HMM 👀👀👀 i'm sorry i can't stop laughing maven's just being a big tsundere at this point it's hilarious and i love it
    'One upwards glance and Maven’s stomach flutters. Curly, fluffy hair, green eyes, beautiful golden skin, and a smile the sun itself envies. It’s official, Maven hates Thomas.' I'M JUST WIGGLING MY EYEBROWS AT THEM ALL THE TIME SHGDHHFGH HELP ME
    we love a slowburn 😔👌 well, mostly. now tommy has to meet cal 👀 a little early but okay let's go
    i like the double use of the title too :> your writing style is really nice tbh, everything flows so well, and i absolutely envy your pacing

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    1. Emo_MabelPines on Chapter 4 Wed 03 Feb 2021 03:27PM UTC

      Thanks so much! I know it’s a little early in the game for Cal to meet Tommy but it certainly compares to later (I’m not winking right now, you are)
      But yes, Maven and his denial. It’s just gonna get worse😔

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