Comment on indecision

  1. doyalikewaffles on Chapter 1 Mon 15 Feb 2021 06:17PM UTC

    Bro the italics of the call and the action in between? I could almost see a movie from it. Like just, flashes between the call, its zoomed in on Tommy's lower half of his face and he speaks into the communicator and then it switches to the action and back and forth and honestly I'm just... *chefs kiss*

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    1. bruisedbutlovely on Chapter 1 Mon 15 Feb 2021 10:48PM UTC

      yes yes yes!!!!!!! that's what i was hoping people could see and i'm so glad it came off that way!!! :))

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      1. doyalikewaffles on Chapter 1 Tue 16 Feb 2021 12:51AM UTC

        Pog!!! You did it really well!!!!!!

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