AzulaBrain (Guest)
on Chapter 2
Mon 08
Mar 202110:09PM UTC
Holy smokes this chapter was incredible. The kiss was so well written, the tension so clear. And the reveal that Iroh was azulas father, and the final twist. Totally worth the wait. I so look forward to the last chapter.
Ahhhhhh thank you!!!!! This comment makes me so happy. I was super nervous about the kiss (writing romance has never been my strong suit) but I'm so glad it worked!
And lol yeah Mai and Azula both have some Capital-I Issues to work through after this...
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